I have two friends who have absolutely nothing in common except for me. But their worlds met one day and because their worlds met, I learned something new, I grew, and I was blessed.
My…rich…friend told me that day, “You need to put yourself out there, get above the fray, let yourself know people better and let them know you.”
I didn’t take long to respond, my wall already up and tightly secured. “You’re crazy,” I replied. “Why would you say such a thing?” All this and more poured out of my brown-eyed Scorpio mouth. “I don’t dig into people’s lives, and I let only a few dig into mine.”
I couldn’t have been more honest. Most days, I would rather stay at home with my dog and write, mainly because I consider myself still in recovery; working in Washington, DC almost finished me, especially after I realized I gave Washington, DC twenty-three years of my life when it deserved about twenty-three seconds. I was in the bowels of its center of gravity; I saw the world on Uncle Sam’s tab, five times, maybe ten; and I saw it all…one human disaster at a time, poverty and hopelessness and then went home to my spoiled life. But I still felt…slighted, unappreciated, and victimized.
“You had it easy—in that government bubble you thrived in—and they handed you everything, including all that stuff you’re writing about,” I am often reminded. “You were warned, D.A. (Dennis) Winstead, so don’t blame them for all of the relentless waste and in-your-face cronyism that pushed you out. Now it’s time to pick yourself up, clean off the stench of politics, take the bull by the horns…and move on to the real world; you walked away, so you have to move on; so do it.” I can only wonder why everyone didn’t say these things to me and if only they did it…a little sooner.
Lord Have Mercy on my crazy soul…I was dying to get back at some of those shameless parasites in Washington, and I loved every second doing it. I was defeated and wanted nothing but to write about it…alone and battered. But the problem is: I spent more time digging at those parasites than figuring out how to write good, easy-to-read fiction. And the truth hit me way too late in the process…no one wants to read about grinding axes and personal baggage. It doesn’t read well, it doesn’t sell well, and it certainly doesn’t help you move on. When I finally took the time really to read my first novel, I wanted to send a refund, a sympathy card, or an apology to every buyer. Soon after, I made a strategic decision to give a freebie to each of them when my second book was released. The problem was most of them never came back to read more. I wasn’t surprised. I understood. I knew the reason.
I’m not even sure when I finally realized an even bigger truth: the best way to get back at cronies is to move on. This is because they can’t; parasites can never leave their hosts. Too many little minds too comfortable in their little, controlled worlds; too many little minds trying to make it right for everyone, and in doing so never running out of taxpayers’ money. What a pile of…. I cogitated a lot during my so-called recovery. But beyond these truths and that bitter pill called “reality,” I know I should be thankful for the opportunities handed down to me. They gave me the opportunity to see the world the way so few get to see it. They picked up my tab and paid a salary way too high and a benefits package way too generous. Taxpayers should be crying, not me.
That said, I guess it was time for some changes and it just so happened that a Muslim African emailed me out of the blue that same day. I first met Mohammed Sheriff Alusine in Johannesburg about six years before. We were on official U.S. Department of State business…I was the trainer and he was a trainee. But I noticed right away that Alusine had history; all Africans have history, but he was different–smart, and motivated, yet shy, reserved, and seemingly thankful of every little thing that came his way. I knew Alusine was from Liberia, a country where civil war literally tore the country apart many years ago. He in some way looked like he’d live through one, and that was what I recalled as I read his email.
“I really enjoy reading your books,” Alusine told me. I was of course shocked; very few people take the time to tell me such things. So I replied, saying, “Thanks. I appreciate your kind words” and then he said more in a pithy review.
“The brevity of your characters encouraged me the most. I know we all have to recognize our own inner strength to face real life situations. Their intriguingly determined minds and unpretentious nature reveals to me that one has to maintain a practical outlook to life…there is no ideal world…we only have the real one!”
Needless to say, this hit me like a ton of bricks. Some of my fans say that I have a knack for weaving a tale of mystery and suspense. I always offer a fascinating and illuminating perspective of culture, traditions, and history of various lands, usually Christian lands stricken with deep sadness. I apparently write with empathy for my characters and offer catharsis to my readers through the difficult journeys of healing that they endure. And I create understanding of the human condition across many times and cultures. But they never say anything about that other side of me–being out there, that real person that isn’t carrying around baggage. It seemed that was exactly what most saw when they read my writing…baggage. But this…relatively poor…black man from Africa…gets it. He understands me! He understands my writing! Why? How can anyone understand my writing?
So with this reference point, I took my…rich…friend’s advice to task. I asked Mohammed Sheriff Alusine about his history. He told me he left Liberia three years before the civil war, to study in Khartoum and Kuala Lumpur. He was not in Liberia when his family fled into neighboring Guinea. He didn’t have to tell me more; I knew how refugees in Africa live. But he did tell me about his mother–who not only had twenty-three children but was also a successful businesswoman–found herself alone and ninety miles away from the refugee camps when fighting spilled over into Guinea.
According to Alusine, his mother escaped violence by hiding in the bush and later wandering in the rainforests. During this trying time, she survived on wild fruits, roots, leaves, and unsanitary water, dodging not only the senseless fighting but also wild animals. She stayed hidden for several weeks until she showed up in a village in neighboring Ivory Coast. There she was met by relatives and taken back to Guinea to join her family. They thought she was dead, so I could only imagine the…African-style…jubilation.
Alusine ended his story by sharing the expected: “My mother depended on prayers, faith in Allah, and hope for survival…for faith and hope were the last things she had left. I will never forget seeing her when I returned home in 1998, after eleven years abroad. Without doubt, she had been highly traumatized, but her faith had quadrupled. She had changed a great lot…in ways that I could never explain.” He finished by saying that his mother remained a changed person until March 2008 when she collapsed into a coma. While sitting by her side, he watched her peacefully slip away only to be told by a family elder that she was departing on her journey back to her Creator, Almighty Allah, to receive her rewards. After three months in a coma, his mother, a deeply faithful Muslim mother, departed this earth. She left behind a strong, brave family.
Two days later after my correspondence with Alusine, I told that…rich…friend how I reached step one: I asked a person I considered a dear friend, something personal, expecting the worst, and waiting to hear all of it. You see, I hate sad stories; I always have and always will. I love and have come to expect happy endings even when I knew–deep inside–they wouldn’t come. I told her I liked the way it felt…finally. And she told me that I should write more foreign tales of mystery, difficult journeys and healing. Write more about happy people…faraway people who are thankful and have that deep faith so many of us lack. And this time make it real…no baggage. I agreed wholeheartedly.
I can thank my two friends…one rich, one relatively poor…for my renewed faith in my writing. One told me to get back out there, get to know people and real life, and write about it. One told me a simple fact of life: there is no ideal world; we only have the real one to live in.
So with all this said and done, the time to stop bashing make believe United States Government cronies in fictional stories has come…and my cogitation hits the restart button. Stop writing about all that baggage and get over it. Get the move on D.A. (Dennis) Winstead, and start by ending that push and shove muck you’re trying to write. It’s not that hard to move on. It’s not rocket science; it’s plain old common sense. It won’t hurt…so bring your writing back to your roots, your homeland, and over to the positive side…here in America. Ah…back to America. I can do that. I can write about Americans, being American, living the American dream. I can do it.
And then my never-ending cogitation takes another 180, as my relatively poor…friend of mine came back to mind. He’s the one with very little, but thankful for everything he has and I’m instantly drawn back in. Yes, I have some free time on my hands and plenty of good old African lore stories. Maybe this time I’ll write a true story, set in a resilient and proud faraway land. Maybe I’ll write about Liberia; it is the land where slaves who wanted to return to Africa ended up after our civil war; they use the American dollar, speak English, and it’s full of beautiful and strong people. They just had their own civil war…odd when you think about it. And odd it may be, but odd coincidences always make for good writing. Maybe I will write about Haja Madusa Dulululuy, a beautiful and strong Liberian woman, mother, grandmother, and faithful sister in so many glorious ways.
So much to write, so little time, and….
No! Not Again! Stay away from my cogitation. No! Stay away!
Oh my goodness…good Lord. I’m confused again.
It’s a small world…so write about it.
D.A. (Dennis) WINSTEAD